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The Suitcase

A writing competition for students

Once upon a time there was an old man with a suitcase. It held a bomb - a nuclear bomb - and his plan was to set it off to destroy the world. His name was Jeffrey and never before had anyone thought to destroy this very world. There was only one hero who could stop this madness. His name was Super Wave.

The next day Jeffrey started his plot near the Empire State Building with the suitcase that held a nuclear bomb. It was all over the news as he went to go set off the bomb, but then Super Wave stepped in dramatically. However, as he was trying to stop it, he pressed the red button. It was a trick; that's what activated it. Jeffrey attached Super Wave to the bomb. The world had no hope and no hero.

Until the suitcase started moving! It started to grow legs and moved off the building and flew. It took Super Wave with it as well. It was incredible. The suitcase started talking saying, "Thank you, thank you!" But it realised it still had a bomb so he opened up and got Super Wave to cool the bomb down. They did it in the park and saved the day.

The end.

Written by Harvey Lihou, age 12
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